Website critique please!

[totallypersonal]

Hi everyone,

I've just redesigned our website, to try to make it a bit simpler, and fresher.

I'm still adding a few bits and pieces, but any help or tips would be great!

www.totallypersonal.co.uk

Thanks,

Rob

[logobear]

website fails to load correctly in firefox.
there is a massive empty white space filling most of the screen, then the 3 box banner starting 3 step ordering is only partly displayed.
The product starts way too far down the page, - your customer is interested in stuff, not your logo or site navigation.
For good SEO i think you need more copy unless that is hidden/metadata?
nice clean look and appealing colours !

[totallypersonal]

Thanks for the feedback! I've just tested it myself in Firefox, and it seems to be formatting perfectly for me... I'll test it out on some older versions of FF this evening and see if I can fix it! All of the SEO is built into the Opencart system with metadata I believe, but that is my next area to work on improving anyways

Thanks again!

[Imme]

It failed to load on my mobile properly. Loads of white space. You may have an issue with the margin and padding settings.

[totallypersonal]

Hmmm interesting... It seems to load on both my phone (iPhone) and all of my browers fine. Definitely have to look into this!

Thanks

[harlequeen]

Loaded in firefox for me perfectly. I also think the product is too far down the page, although the graphics that are there are colourful and eye catching. The advert for the phone cases dominates, I think. Personally, I would prefer more product and less other stuff.

[totallypersonal]

Thanks for the feedback. I'm not sure about the product thing, as I plan to have banners for more products at the top, so it shows off the products more than the featured module does. I'll have a look at it. Thanks again!

[Mattie]

The layout and colours look a bit familiar to me.

[John G]

Same/similar text too, about being one of the UK's best etc etc always raises a smile that one. :biggrin:

I do like the site though but as other have mentioned - I'd have more products rather than one big one.

[totallypersonal]

The layout and colours look a bit familiar to me.

Hi Mattie,

Could you elaborate on what you mean please?

Rob